My short “One Hour” is featured today on Paragraph Planet, a creative writing website that features 75-word pieces on one topic. “One Hour” is one of four pieces I submitted as a Christmas sequence, with each piece offering a different point of view. The sequence was inspired by one of many holiday dinners at headquarters, so now I can’t say nothing good never came out of a crappy meal at my desk.
Check out “One Hour” while you can. The pieces change daily. I’ll post an update when the others appear.
REWIND: This is “One Toy” — the piece that appeared Dec. 29, 2010
One toy. Dad let me bring one from the tree. It’s really cool! Just what I wanted! It makes noises and lights up! I’ve been playing for hours! Dad says it won’t be much longer. Really. He’s eating the last of Christmas pie now, but it’ll be a bit until we go back to the apartment. He says it’s his job to watch over the important news people working tonight. But he says I’m more important.
UPDATE: This is “One Hour” — the piece that appeared Jan. 18, 2011
One hour. Another hour to go, and I can take the boy home. I don’t much like spending Christmas watching over the news folk, but it’s better than not having a job. At least they fed us all pretty well. That’s two meals I won’t have to buy. I couldn’t get the boy much, but he seems to like the gadgets well enough. He’s not as interested in the football. Maybe I can change that tomorrow.
January 25, 2011 at 3:01 pm
Thank you so much for the feedback. I really appreciate it — especially coming from a real person.
January 18, 2011 at 5:20 pm
“Maybe I can change that tomorrow.”
My favorite line. It’s very concise and conveys something about everyday interaction. Especially with children.
Enjoyed,
D